My $0.02.
1) The article as a whole "played along" with Newton's alleged guilt, despite the NCAA, FBI, and every journalist in the country turning up nothing. Despite voluntarily handed over bank and phone records turning up nothing.
2) He lent too much credence to #3. What about the Newton allegation automatically implies payments were widespread? What about aTm confines this to ONLY Manziel?
3) The racist angle, which the original piece diminished, was ignored completely here, despite in my opinion probably being the #1 factor, even if on a subconscious level.